Cornelius (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 11, 2006

Beautiful thoughts, well penned.

Ron

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

your affinity with Cornelius, with such an enlightened mind is synonymous with your own personal and spiritual development ...

a surprisingly refreshing and unique poem ...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

I agree with Erin Belle ... your muse is different here and I like how the innocent pondering makes me feel.

You are truly growing and questioning many things. Don't be waylaid with misunderstanding things as you move forward either. There is much to gleaned in those seasons of quest.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

Profound offering Susan!!

Thank you!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

I can only echo the others.........
how creative this is........
applause
pax A

wow

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

A smile is usually born, from our time to mourn
It's breath comes from the rue, it's might comes when we choose;
that celebrating life, and counting our gain,
Is better than dwelling on what we might, lose. lovya MORE! Art

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

Susan

This splendid poem speaks on many levels, as you bridge the chasm of the inponderables, in a translucent and transparent manner..

Your thought process knows no bounds...which is a very good thing for a writer

Love and Shalom

Peter

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

I love the title, Susan, 'Cornelius' rolls off the tongue with welcome, all around.

I felt such a strong urge to Muse with you, I was lost in your words until I became 'Once upon a time'!

You've strengthened, and inspired me, Susan, with this poem. Thank you.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Cornelius only sought to keep peace, For He saw that as the greater good. What a great write about him and about so much more. Pierre.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Cornelius was a great man and the link between Jews and Gentiles. You could not have picked on a better man. Victor

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Well Penned Susan
A profound write

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Oh my, Susan you visited eons past how exciting! This is intriguing poetry leaving many levels of thought to be pondered! Wondrous!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Insightful and very bold write on the intricate nature of love and the past writes.

fEe

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2006

Susan, this was so deep, powerful and meaningful...I feel the anointing over your life and it's marvelous!!!

Peace & Love,
Dove