Veiled (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 10, 2006

They're getting better and better. What a good read this one is. Keep going, don't be detained. Cheers

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

A masterpiece at best! You are truly a master at penning and have a way with words. Close your eyes girl and continue to dream. Thanks. Jim

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

Susan, this is lovely! The rhythm and rhyme add a classical flavor and the imagery is softly sensual. Splendid work!

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

This is so full of emotion, and longing without fear. This one of my
favorites of yours. Love Pierre.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

A soft and sensual poem, Susan. Very nice and a pleasure to read!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

the enchanting and magical atmosphere of this poem is only surpassed by the power of your love desiring to be released from its present shape ... luv how you conclude this poem, Susan ... in fact, the entire feel to it ...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

"Then kiss awake my eyes" Just splendid Belle. A beautifully flowing statement from a delicate heart. Ritchie says: "Va Va Voom!"

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

Lovely love poem, romance at its best. It seemed so easy to write when I know how difficult it is to achieve. Victor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

A very lovely Ode to Those That Love.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 7, 2006

Absolutely magical!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Excellent in all aspects. Great from start to finish

Allen

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Those who know love can make you feel love. this poem is a love pill which should be prescribed to those who lack it. Excellent

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Let those thoughts fly and meet up with all the like minded thoughts in dreamland...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

A worthy nod indeed "to all who love." The word "love" is thrown about so often that we sometimes forget to treasure its reality. These lines remind us that it's one thing we never want to forget or fall into the habit of taking for granted. Enjoyed the read.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Flows straight to the heart
Great opening stanza
A kick start
"Then kiss awake my eyes"
Loved that part.
DWB

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Very nice...an enjoyable poem to view...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

To dream, perchance to . . . Wake up and realize it is no dream . . . It is real . . . Excellent, Susan.

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Love those dreams! It must be Saturday morning, sleep in late, enjoy snuggling with your "kindred soul."
Beautifully expressed.

Connie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Fantastic, this is romantic longing at its best, no condemnation just passionate desire to hold your lover once more and it works so well in this style you used.

fEe

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

heavenly~

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Ah this is so sweet and the rhyme and meter was just right. I like this one.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2006

Dreams become reality sometimes.
Excellent write.

Michael