Back in the days when we played in the attic
When we were all small and loved the hair static
We'd make fun of looks and laugh at our faces
We'd hoodwink the image of dusty old traces
Those trunks of our childhood
They held old folks dreams
We'd squeal when it'd open from curious screams
The joys of a button all tarnished and old
We hoped for lost treasure...we wanted the gold
Our fantasies laughed and let go emotions
We dusted off shells...that echoed the ocean
Moth-eaten hats and fedora feathers
Rusty old hinges and worn out old leather
Stuff of a lifetime in rotting old wood
Memories keeping good children good
When rainy day moments sent smiles to the top
That held old folks dreams in heated old lofts
Where children found images decked out in dreams
From years long ago among moments with things
That housed love and glory...the patriots vote
The red white and blue that sheltered their hopes
The past of a dynasty dressed up to there
Kids all in smiles amid dreams of lost years
Those rainy day moments when we dallied in side
We played hide and seek with broomsticks our ride
The friends that were there, the siblings who played
In rainy day times where our memory strayed
Susan~ This was very special!
Thank you for sharing your heart and your families memories!
I feel warm after reading this GREAT poem
And... Walk in time!
Warmly, Warrior Sheeeooxx
You took me back to my Aunt Bette's attic ...a wonderful dutch colonial farm house with maze gardens and gazing balls, heavy furniture and warm rugs. but that attic and all it's mystery...the stairway that led to it...and all the wonderful hours of make believe. All came to a crashing hatl and her death and the damming of the little T...the hhouse still stands uninhabited on an island...stripped by politics and looters. Thank God for memories...and thank you for bring them back to me today.
Love,
Taylor
BEautiful Susan, yes after reading this I felt a lot of old forgoten childhood memories resurfacing, they were the best of times....
Fee
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
An outstanding write which reminds me of the years I worked for my uncle in his antique shop. We often attended estate sales and I would go through hundreds of boxes filled with forgotten items from the past. It was like peering into a time long forgotten, finding someone's memorabilia carefully packed away in attics -never to be seen again by the original owner. The easy flow and the nostalgic feel created here makes this an enjoyable read. Very nice Susan!
~Butch
I had many experiences like this Belle, especially when I lived up in Santa Barbara. Sifting through the junk of another persons past always brought me a certain amount of satisfaction, wisdom, and creative inspiration. Everyone seemed to struggle and suffer and dream just like I did. This is a fine poignant write that I'm sure everyone can relate too.
Susan, This was a sweet trip down memory lane. I, too, remember those days. I wonder whatever happened to those wooden shoes in which I nearly fell because they were too big for my tiny little feet? Ah.... sweet.
Thanks. This was a nice piece and a nice reminder of the simpler times we once knew.
A beautiful memoir of your childhood. I feel sorry for the children being raised in situations where beautiful memories as this are simply not being cherished. Eloquent and innocent. Thanks Susan,,,
Love you,
simon
The stuff that dreams are made of and memories too.
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
What a fantastic write to bring back memories i've had filed away
for years.Way to go, Susan..Awesome
God Bless,
Michael
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
I just dought a pin stripped fedora in NY, lol.
The consistancy of your poems is something else, rhyme, metre and content is always so captivating. I love the rain or rather did, but it just won't stop atdemo...
Best go get me broom....
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2007
Such a pleasure to read your work! Always, love Holly
Totally captivating poem, Susan -- you brought back some lovely memories of when I was a child and playing in my grandma's attic, things I haven't thought of for years. This is remarkable, your imagery is lovely here -- one can almost 'see' you there.
Love,
CJ
A wicked Cajun Fairy named Robes Pierre entered the impenetrable Magical doll land of Sha Bebe. Queen Faustina, the ruler of the doll land, thought she had destroyed him, but he's back! Will the doll land survive his evil ways?
Thank you for sharing your heart and your families memories!
I feel warm after reading this GREAT poem
And... Walk in time!
Warmly, Warrior Sheeeooxx
Love,
Taylor
Fee
~Butch
Ron
nicely penned.....Art Sun...
Aberjhani
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Thanks. This was a nice piece and a nice reminder of the simpler times we once knew.
Jill
Love Tinka
Love you,
simon
for years.Way to go, Susan..Awesome
God Bless,
Michael
The consistancy of your poems is something else, rhyme, metre and content is always so captivating. I love the rain or rather did, but it just won't stop atdemo...
Best go get me broom....
Love,
CJ