Todays lesson will be one of passion and the mystery that can play at will.
Just kidding but , in truth...passion has many faces. This weeks poems are about some of them.
~SKdeV~
In winter's cold she watches every move he makes
She breaths him in then out again, his nails slightly rake
Her cheek, this man of fathoms, this shadow of her thoughts
This one who comes when she hums and in her dreams is caught
He's mired right where she wants him, within her passions' nest
She goes to him and then within he takes her in, digests
Every bead of her desires in every rhythm makes
The circle then of all her whims and pulses, every fate
He can't be more than offered but manages all the same
He wraps her up in passion, then whispers out her name
She perks her nerves before the thought of him comes round to call
She knew him from centuries old when first love came to boil
The magic of a pair of hearts caught in this mystic power
When thoughts race toward the fate of hearts and passions start to shower
Down upon these hungry hearts who beat within this maze
These two who found the perfect match and snatched love from the haze
These hearts that beat identical, who walk now hand-in-hand
Into the void that's filling and making their love grand.
Southern Writers
Susan Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2007
I love your writing style Susan!
This is exceptional!
Full of lovely mysteries is felt deeply~
WArmly, Warrior Sheeeooxx
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
I love the poem, especially these last two lines:
"These hearts that beat identical, who walk now hand-in-hand
Into the void that's filling and making their love grand."
A love that can transcend the centuries and keep burning strong is quite an amazing love. Well done!
~Butch
Thankyou for this exceptional lesson in love dear teacher oh Belle-o-the-Ball. Identically beating hearts is an incredible concept. I wonder how many do?
Love and Light ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Passion has many faces. We will be looking forward to the contrasts of life unfolding. Victor
Hmmmm, Susan, sometimes I think you read my mind. Indeed you have covered so many of the possibilities of passion from that feeling of Dejavu from "centuries old" once again to the filling of the void of "passion's nest"...and oh boy, is it magic. Hmmmm, smiling...this is a favorite of mine.
Love and hugs,
Taylor
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This is exceptional!
Full of lovely mysteries is felt deeply~
WArmly, Warrior Sheeeooxx
"These hearts that beat identical, who walk now hand-in-hand
Into the void that's filling and making their love grand."
A love that can transcend the centuries and keep burning strong is quite an amazing love. Well done!
~Butch
Fee
Ron
Love and Light ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
These hearts that beat identical,
who walk now hand and hand,loved this verse
Thanks for sharing,
Michael
Enjoyed this one tooooo much!!
Love Tinka
Love and hugs,
Taylor
nice work of poetic love thoughts.....Art Sun...