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Simultaneously Beating
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By Susan K. de Vegter copyright 2007 Your every essence magnifies the mystery in our meeting Each word is tasted gently although our time is fleeting The hours are for memories with farewell but a cure If lasting longer than it does I�m not sure I could endure Friendship is a forever fact when it grips our very being With palms held up to capture time Simultaneously�beating. Each and every one of us thirst for a chance like this To lie inside another�s heart so deep it just may burst Then sense the comfort given to a moment �yours and mine When centuries can�t upset two spirits over time For heaven, you and heartbeats and instincts rich in meaning For souls acute within the other Simultaneously�beating.

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Reviews of "Simultaneously Beating"

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 4, 2007

Something else beating here.

Ron

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

This is beautiful, Susan. I have come to expect such work from your pen. Again, beautiful!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

Two as one.......eloquently, beautifully penned. Thank you, Susan, this is a masterpiece!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

Awe-struck. . . .
Adjectives can't possibly descriptive your poetry.
DWB

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Everyone wants a chance to love. I know people who never loved or were loved although they searched for love. You can almost touch the lonliness in them. Great poem. Victor

Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Enjoy this write, Susan. Optimism and undeniable truth about the power of love.
Yours,
simon

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

love indeed transcends time and place as you so eloquently express ... it is the synchronous interplay of two souls moving through the universe together, separate yet joined by the heart ...

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Susan, a beautiful portrayal of two people in love, you've expressed it in a lovely way. I liked this!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Only the concept of this write is anywhere close to being as special as the actual words you use here to conjure up the magic moments of love throught time and space. Touching...

Fee

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Beautiful conception of love. Imagine a forever where you can look back over the eon's wit the one that you love.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

The depth of love is contained within your poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Sim[ly splendid as always! To love is always worth the cost;-)ET

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

How pretty this is. When I read the title this is not what I expected, what a pleasant surprize~!
debra

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