In my mind, where treasures are private
I find you there exploring the space
Orating the moon and stars
Seeking my cheek with fingers that trace
Innocent beating so quiet, rebounds
Caressing my hair as your fingers embrace
Don't make a sound...don't make a sound
The heart that is filling
The power that grips
Embracing the evening
Mine dares to skip
Innocent beating in hushed...rebounds
Don't make a sound, don't make a sound.
Did you feel me tremble
As eager words slipped
When slowly we strolled
When hips were to hips
Embraced by a chance in the cold night air
Snuggle me closer and please dare to dare.
I'll sit at your feet and kiss every word
Embrace your need with curve upon curve
Succumb to your wishes
As our moans rebound
Then don't make a sound,
Please, don't make a sound.
Tell me a story about the moon
Take me to Venus while I swoon
Let's ride the comets and chase our own space
Brush away phosphorous from my face
Swing on a dare as Novas rebound
Shhhhh, don't make a sound
Don't make a sound!
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Reviews of "Tell Me a Story and Don't Make a Sound"
delectaaable and mellifluous romance highlighted by the refrain...I keep hearing Allison Kraus in the background with a soft ersion of,"When You Say Nothing At All". It's as though you don;t want to wake from a dream or simply tae advantage of that trusting time when no words are necessay...
Love and hugs,
~Taylor
"Tell me a story about the moon
Take me to Venus while I swoon
Let's ride the comets and chase our own space
Brush away phosphorous from my face
Swing on a dare as Novas rebound
Shhhhh, don't make a sound
Don't make a sound!"
I just visualise the finger touching his lips 'shh, don't make a sound.' She is in total control - empowered by her sexuality. He is submissive, fuelled at will by her sexuality. Hmm, the strength that a woman has with that one silencing finger pressed against his lips.
If you don't hear anything... that's me... praising your pen wispering the passion of a lover. Outstanding concept...
amd message, here. A goody, indeed! - Bill
I love this write completely from beginning to end, as you weave your magic of love throughout it's length I want to reach out with my own fingers and touch the magic that is yuor essence. Well done dear Susan, well done. Especially love the chorus like repeats.
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Love and hugs,
~Taylor
Ron
Take me to Venus while I swoon
Let's ride the comets and chase our own space
Brush away phosphorous from my face
Swing on a dare as Novas rebound
Shhhhh, don't make a sound
Don't make a sound!"
JUST OH SO GOOD!!
Love Tinka
Riveting.
Regards
Dai
amd message, here. A goody, indeed! - Bill
Fee
A keeper one Of many added to my collection
From your brilliant romantic thoughts
Love & Peace
William
nice.....Art Sun...