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Cinderella's Dream
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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This is the real grave of Cinderella. She can be visited at Rose Bill Historic Cemetary in Macon, Georgia... high above the Ocmulgee River.
Photograph by Mariah Rowse 2006


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Cinderella was a small girl's dream a long, long time go
She really did exist for me in fairytale folklore
I think the child in me was she, like every other girl
Who looked for her Prince Charming in silks with onyx curls
Childhood dreams resided in a chest of dreams
Where stress was locked out of the code of wonderful old things
I walked today upon the hill above the Ocmulgee
Rounded the lane and stood face to face with my childhood dream
An angel stood before my eyes in stoic granite stone
I couldn't move, was mesmerized ,at what I'd come upon
With aromatic breeze just then, in petuclli laced vanilla
Standing in awe I read the stone, here lies Cinderella
I shook my fears loose just then,I read the epitaph
Cinderella lived and died, was loved and that's a fact
Here in middle Georgia, right at the river's side
The Princess of all my years loved before she died
She found her real Prince Charming, this brought me to my knees
This fairytale had lived a life...she chose to BELIEVE !!!!!

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Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Susan - Enjoyed the poem. If Cinderella really lived, it's natural that she would be buried in Rose Hill Cemetery with Little Martha And Elizabeth Reed. You poem brings back the magic I felt on my visits there. - David Hightower

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
BELIEVE!!! Oh yes...I most certainly do. This Cinderella knows that Prince Charming does exist and is alive and well I my heart. I just wish my carriage would turn into a pumpkin a little less often.

A most enjoyable poem, Susna. next time I'm in macon will you take me there? Looks like it could be in May!

Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
very interesting and clever. how many states do people actually visit cemeteries in? can't be many. much luck

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 16, 2007
A beautiful story/poem as only you can do so well Susan! Such interesting info too! Love the photo! Thanks for sharing.

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 16, 2007
Beautiful piece and loved the Pic as well.

Allen

Reviewed on February 16, 2007
Susan,

Beautiful inspiration lives in hope, and in your words: thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2007
OOO this is interesting, I wonder if sleeping beauty is out there waiting for me?

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2007
This is a beautiful write,an offering of romance,If only the stone could talk,God Bless,
Michael

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 16, 2007
This is such a wonderful offering.....yes there are more Cunerellss still dream today!!

Thanks for sharing this amazing piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 16, 2007
'stoic granite stone'

Interesting adjective - stoic. Granite is pure stone, and incredibly durable and almost indistructive - stoicism aptly suits its character. The Scottish city of Aberdeen is known as the 'Granite City'. Quite fitting therefore that the angel be sculptured in granite as a testimony to the indestructibleness of true love and the quest for it.

Even when I saw this film as a boy, I entered into the spirit of Cinderalla's quest for requited love. Indeed, as I get older and more sentimental, I have re-entered into the spirit of love stories and films. I now allow my eyes to fill at the end of Olivier and Oberon's Wuthering Heights, and also the end scenes of Secrets and Lies. We're not made of granite are we - thank goodness!

Enjoyed what this poem stirred in me. Thanks.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on February 16, 2007
As a fellow Georgian, thank you for this one. The story is a shocker for some, in its beautiful and highly believable one. Your telling it creates "presence:" of the reader. In the US South, high emotions create, "chill bumps," and that's what your poem gave me. It is so deeply tender... Little Girl Susan.
- Bill

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
I love the word usage in this poem...the imagery was superb!
Oh to be that little girl again, dreaming of her Prince Charming...
the innocence, the purity, the freedom to imagine, the will to believe...
Excellent write!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
Aww, your poem is so beautiful Susan. Love Holly

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
Nice work of thoughts on this view of the fairy tale life of Cinderella...

enjoyed.....Art sun...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 15, 2007
How many Cinderella's are buried with no head stones next to their Prince Charming?


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