Do you know what passion is between two real lovers?
It's that funny beat that builds out of nowhere.
It's the hairs that stand up proud on the nape of your neck
The glazed-over eyes from being close to a NOVA as it burst
Or the flashcube, the old fashioned kind , with that POP!!!!
It's the human mind that swaps BOOMS with the raw creature coming up...and losing it's grip
The ZOOM when the room swirls and the head slowly goes back exposing the beautiful arch of the neck
The eyes that slowly ROLL somewhere... MYSTERIOUS
It's the absolute banishment of all logic and the ensuing race from nerve to nerve to nerve
Like the Morse Code of body language I THINK!
It's the body collapsing to the passion of a lover so familiar that PLEASURE means more than just 'to please'
Have you ever lit a match...put it to a sparkler then twirled around in the misty night air or watch the silver tinsel form on a lake when the sun is setting?
That's the affect ... of passion
Ever forget where you are...
What day it is or time?
What is TIME when real passion utilizes it's mystery to erase that fact?
Ever build up so much steam inside that you JUST KNOW you will burst...
Then go beyond that?
This is the effect passion has on lovers...REAL LOVERS.
Do you want to know real passion?
Then prepare yourself for REAL LOVE...
Passion is TIMELESS!!!!
You got it Sis! You know passion and love and the whole enchillada!'=_
ET
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Nice write. Sounds wonderful. Lady J
Reviewed by Simon Barreiros (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
A well timed writing for July 4th lovers. Hope yr fireworrks lite up the night and last longer than those bursting shimmers of fire in the sky.
love ya...simon
What is passion? An explosion, an attraction: kinda like getting hit by lightning and living to tell the tale. :) An excellent write, Susan, well done!
Isn't it wonderful to realize that there is a difference? The word your poem doesn't address directly, but leaves to be scorned, is LUST. That is what is experienced without the most necessary ingredient, LOVE. Your wise words tell us what we're missing. Thank you. - Bill
Passion is timeless and so is the beauty of this write as the sensuality of your spirit pours into every line to capture the magic that you present....Well done Susan.
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love ya...simon
you capture and reflect upon its energy and effervescence just right ...
Love Tinka
great to see your writing again
Walt
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
A bangin' good write! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
your golden treasured thoughts
Love & peace
William
What a poem.
Webster's should take note.
DWB
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Fee