Mystery (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Very well penned Susan!!

Stunning picture!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Nice pen here, Mystery for sure. Lady J

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

It's hard to believe that real true love still exists, yet I know it does in the hearts of some and mine is one. This is one of my favorites of yours. Love, Pierre.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2007

YUP!!! Just watch my miracle..lol

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 5, 2007

... Trouble is, with most artists it IS the very thing that they "leave out" which makes them most intriguing to the heart and mind and, should they totally "square up" to fill in the gaps, then the appeal wouldn't be the same. I admire greatly your facility with this sustained single column style, Susan. It's a wonderful vehicle for your spontaneous creativity, energy and joie de vivre. This reads clear as a woodcut or brass embossing. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 5, 2007

Powerfully penned poignancy, Susan, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 5, 2007

This is so poignant and heart-wrenching. I felt these lines so very deeply;

Can you rock me into midnight
Hold me tightly while I sleep
Or sing me into heaven
Pronounce my every sigh
Never leave me lonely
And never make me cry

This is so powerful and excellently expressed.

Reindeer

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

Fidelity is what all lovers want and should expect. Powerful write from the heart.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

'watch me bleed' that's great. keep going and cheers.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

Superb poem and art that tickles the imagination with mysteries to ponder!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

The spirits and things I deeply yearned for in life seem to be like air; impossible to cling to. Matters of an entirely different nature were put on the path through life. Reality and dreams seemed to further drift apart as time flowed. Logic like yearnings seemed out of reach. Today I feel the flaw is not in the way things evolve but in my perception. It has nothing to do with some twisted kind of cruelty of higher powers, but with bigger frames that harbor bigger perspectives and higher logic. I wish the agony in your expressions would disappear and make way for the larger logic that is in every way concerned with our well being in a bigger frame.

U

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

"Can you wish me into focus
With a promise that will keep
Can you rock me into midnight
Hold me tightly while I sleep"

Magical verse my friend......Excellent poetry!I love it!.....

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

Not easy to discern characters. Looks are sometimes misleading.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

How thoughtlessly we dissipate for self - Maybe a new design is stealth - love <>Ted

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

There is definately mystery here and stirred by the graphic the words you pose in questions linger on the mind to be contemplated and wondered about as really good poetry should be. I truly enjoyed this one Susan.

Fee

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2007

Wow! This great poem reminded me of someone I once knew ... Wonderfully written, Susan ... Happy 4th ... hugs