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Did You Feel the Rain?
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose…Hadia Beja

Did you feel the rain today?
Falling down your face
Was your heart a pitter patter
As the beat began to race
Was your mind a sea of rolling dreams
Cast in the waves of time
Could you listen to me calling you
In my heart you’re always mine
The air is full of spices
Flowers like sweet jasmine
Fuller lips for sipping
Dripping with sweet passion
If miracles were possible
I’d will you here with me
To climb the highest mountains
Then power play the seas
I know you felt the rain today
Just as I did too
Passions love the drizzle
From eyes of mine to you
Did you feel the rain today?
Falling down your face
Was your heart a pitter patter
As our beats began to race.

    

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 Reviews of "Did You Feel the Rain?"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Yes I did..and right at this moment it is raining out there!!

Need to cuddle up in this cold weather....I want my Micky and I want him NOW!!

LOL!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 3, 2007
Did I feel the rain? Did I feeeeeel the rain?? That's all we've had! LOL Must be a lot of love flowing 'round out there...excellent romantic poem, Susan, storms bring out the best in ya. :) Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
A dellightful treat for fans of rain and love. You convert each of us to loving them... together! Your poem describe the beatuty of togetherness, making the whole even better. Your words do work miracles. - Bill


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 3, 2007
You made the rain soft and warm to my mind with this beautiful love song and it came to life with the smells and colours you infused with your words.

Fee

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Yes I did and it's such a wonderful feeling to be soaked in it and the beauty of your words. Thank you, Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
truly lovely poetry-lovly work here

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
You use a language so full of beautiful metaphors. It is real poetry. It turns the most common situations into something wonderful. Victor

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
I like 'cast in the waves...' Good job. Cheers

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
I didn't feel the rain, perhaps it was because we had no rain here today...but this poem gives a great image of same...e

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Very beautiful weather report {beautiful} love <>Ted


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