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Reflections of Raspberry Drizzles
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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I wrote this after watching an old black and white flick with Bogey and Bacall. She was a strong woman and he was ALL MAN. They were hot!


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soft was the approach of whispers
chilling the sheets
warming again to the humidity
cloaked in the dew of prisimed sweets

reflections of raspberry drizzles
juices attending tongues
taste buds of solvent blushes
kisses in technicolor...she comes

you there in your chair
large hands grasping the corduroy
didgets upon your chin
thinking...boy oh boy

a woman
upon the inside lids
her flavor
woman-woman...she lives

inside the man
the question lies
give to she and breath the smile
whisper shut before it dies

she the one
who questions him
tawdry thoughts
bawdy whims

he this man a storied tower
learned scholar with rolled sleeves
questions ...answers... hooks all worded
usurp her challenge....
feel the power.

copyright 2006 Susan Kathryn de Vegter


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 Reviews of "Reflections of Raspberry Drizzles"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Very well done Susan!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Only an able and bold poet could put into words submerged appreciation for this kind of melding two strong characters into a bowl of whipped cream! . From whence you cometh, your writing is always to the loving point... and this is an exemplary example ! ! !
This is writing of high caliber... with a seductive pen.
- Bill


Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
You played it for her
Play for me (Casa Blanca)
Also a Bogard Classic
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Very well done sweet Susan, you images are striking and delicious to say the least. I enjoyed this one a lot
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Yep, strong women and real men didn't have the social impact it does today . . . Oh, the media still loves strong women, but men? They shun them for the friggin' Metro Man . . . God help us all . . .

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Breath the smile & all enclosed is lovely & wonder*filled & beautiful & many other sounds of which there are no words - All goodness & love*Ted

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Celluloid duo of the highest...black and white pen to page...
great memories...
John

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
A cat and mouse game where the Man has to be a mighty mouse to win such a prize. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
Play it again Sam.

Walt

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
Those were the days. Nicely done prose.

Reviewed on September 11, 2007
They were a beautiful team, I loved this Poem so much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
yes, they were hot as is this write-enjoyed!

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on September 11, 2007
Susan, you've outdone yourself again
From beginning to end
AND the Title!
Superb and a joy reading.
Doug

Reviewed on September 11, 2007
Gorgeous, Susan. A classic feel to this delicious write: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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