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Morning Sun
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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This is one of two poems I wrote of Rodin's, "The Kiss".

Susan*

This morning sun is squinting in...to glisten where our love has been
Embroiled in play that touched the nerves and bleached the walls with shadows curve
The dance of love that tore the silence and whispered screams of lust and balance
For in the night with passions calling came the answer of provocative lolling
When lust won out over common sense and juices seethed until they bent
From tweaks that spoke to nerves on fire and called upon loves true desires
And two who took from suckled love and stuck to sheets while just above
The bed of shadows rocked to sleep provoked the night with passions deep
And lulled these two to doze with hums that pushed and tugged until did come
The final dew from love so deep that pooled and stuck them to the sheets
The throws of love that never lacked...stuck back to front and front to back
In love's embrace till dawn awoke their love again that gently spoke
Again to toss and moan with sighs and promises ever...with no good-byes.
To seal this love for time to keep and love again then fall asleep.

© 2007 Susan Kathryn de Vegter





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 Reviews of "Morning Sun"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 23, 2007
Outstanding write my friend
loved this very much
Peace & love

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
such an erotic write-beautiful

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
A wonderful passionate writing...full of romance and love!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Great passionate offering!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Exquisite, sensual, evocative, spiritual, loving - just a few adjectives that reflect the beauty of this poem.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Passionately Good!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Such a soft sensuality to this one as it seems to whisper into the ear of the reader. Smooth and perfect in imagery and flow.

Fee

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Excellent choice of words Susan, striking combinations.

In friendship,

Axilea

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Susan, This piece brings me to Shakespeare's Midsummers Night's Dream. Sorry it's the theater in me I guess. Very sensually and provocatively written. Lovely simply lovely.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
I wonder if what Rodin envisioned while he sculpted even came close to this. You have a way of sculpting some of the most beautiful and passionate poetry I have ever read. I really love this one.

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Love shouts out loud in this passionate love poem.

Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Susan,

You write of Morning Sun, I write of the Night. :) Nature on both our minds...this is beautifully imaged and penned! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Much light given to this sleepless pillow~love Ted

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
This really sizzles with the heat of the sun...well done

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
I'll never see "The Kiss" the same way again . . . I wonder if Rodin gave any thought to the exquisite carnal nature "The Kiss" would bring forth . . . Of course he did, but whereas he could sculp, he wouldn't be able to hold a candle to Susan K. de Vegter's passionate feeling toward his masterpiece . . .


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