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Under a Strawberry Moon
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Plant City Florida is the Strawberry capital of the US. It is where I have clients. Their Strawberry Festival is coming up the end of February. It is an amazing fiesta of the crop harvest with entertainment, food, arts and midway. The strawberries are the ripest and are a treat in pizzas, shortcakes, icecream, preserves, pancakes, syrup...just stop along with a million people once a year.

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This evening as I was working late
Driving in strawberry fields
I caught the flash of distance
Disappearing from my windshield
I pulled over to the side of the road
Watched the strawberry pickers
It flashed again as fast as a blink
Like a speeded up agenda
There you were before me
Smile as big as a mile
Hands on your hips to gesture me
Grinning with love ... a man child
I saw the water in your eyes
Your hair as the collar moved
The wisp of a breeze whipping your beard
Cutting a mischievous groove
I wiped my eyes from delirium
I thought that I was sick
My knees wobbled from passionate thoughts
I captured this moment...quick!
Next thing I knew I was embraced
By a Spanish ... Romeo
He thought that my faint was all just for him
I didn't say and he'll never know
I ate my fill of strawberries
Sweet and juicy and thick
My passions were sated far too soon
Red juices, sweet...did the trick
I regress back to that moment
As this evening begins to swoon
I try to replay that passionate play
Under a Strawberry Moon.  


Copyright 2008 Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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 Reviews of "Under a Strawberry Moon"
Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Susan, hummmmmm...loved this! Memories even tickle the heart and bring the soul to life...time and time again. Well written and great images and flow.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
oh for a strawberry moon to be under, and a romeo to be lovin,what a grat poem Susan! A pleasure to treasure!

luv
et

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Beautiful write oustanding imagery
You tend to place the readers there with you
you possess a unique touch with your golden pen
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
.... Enough to make anyone see red with Valentino around! :)) Are you SURE it wasn't John Lennon???!!! He might have sung about this episode when he wrote Strawberry Fields (written, actually in Almeria, Spain, I think)... perhaps he breathed some "stuff" on you! Just kiddin, but then, all these kinds of remembrances triggered by highly sensual triggers are kinda whoopsadaisy, aren't they? The rhythm and metre swings along nicely here, Susan. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
wow--a wonderful poem for the fruit of romance--the festval sounds wonderful

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
I love them berries... and I'll think of you and romance with each and every. Strawberry eyes, nose, lips, and other things good for that man in your life! - Bill


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Love it Susan and yea the sensuality of the strawberry as a lover's fruit cannot be quesioned...no other can compare...well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Under a Strawberry Moon sounds like a wonderful place to be, as does that Strawberry Festival!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
WOW ! Fantastic Susan. I absolutely love it. Very well done poet.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
mOOn & strawberry _ Under & over this sweetness contains ~olloveev~TedSo

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
I love the images of your Strawberry Moon! Delicious poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Good stuff. onderfully woven observations.

Walt

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
...magnetic fields of sweetness...you have penned Susan.
well done...
John

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Wow, this is such a beautiful glimse into a romantic journey. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
very visual, well written. Passion from strawberry fields whew. where did you say this filed was? I'll pick you can drive by. LOL Seriously though, I enjoyed reading it. I hope you found your strawberry moon passion again.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Strawberries and each other, How delicious!
Great write,

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Strawberry Fields Forever. . .
I like your title better!
Time for some shortcake
And whipped cream.
Juicy poetry
Doug

Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Save some of those sweet strawberries for me, okay??? YUMMO!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D *drooling* LOL

Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Susan,

Having been to the Strawberry Festival in Ponchatoula, Louisiana...this brought back memories. ANY WAY you want strawberries, you can get 'em. :) Excellent write, very well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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