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Eyes of Green
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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This was written in 1999.


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I looked into his eyes today.
Just curious for this joy, I pay,
The price of knowing now or then...
The rainbow colors that dwell within.
For green the beauty looking back,
With all the love I seem to lack.

Appears to be a friend in need,
In my reflection he plants the seed.
Of years of friendship...good or bad,
The tender love we never had.
And eyes of emeralds, with flecks of gold,
Browns sponge-painted upon colors bold.

The sadness so familiar too,
In mirror images of me and you.
The possibilities of future lingers,
As fate has pointed it's fickle finger.
Upon the likes of us... my friend,
A desire for you to take my hand.

And become pals with miles between,
Two pairs of eyes and one the greens.
And mine of blue that warmly stare,
Upon a friend that isn't there.
For you are happy in your space,
Now I am gone without a trace.

Of love I held within my soul,
And all the dragons that came to scold...
The virgin of the forest glen,
With all the chances that have been,
To come and free her from her plight.
My last chance gone...with this good knight.

God speed upon this rainy day,
Until the chance for you to play.
This game for real with hearts afire,
To come and quench this deep desire.
And smile upon my world ,dear friend
Then ride away, with hand in hand.

© 1999 Susan Kathryn de Vegter


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 Reviews of "Eyes of Green"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
So sad. Those emerald eyes held great meaning.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Beautiful, Susan. Nothing to add but a contented "Aaaaaaaaaah!" :)) K xx

Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Susan this is top shelf, deeply emotive and perfectly penned.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
I agree with both Andy and Tinka, Sis, you are a truly fine poet and we can learn a lot from you!

luv
et


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Even nearly a decade ago, you're rhyme and metre were perfect. With the ability never to waste a word.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Beautiful write and striking picture!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Quite powerful, Susan. The eyes truly are the windows to the soul.

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
The insight in this poem is immeasureable. The understanding, The longing and the love you have are incredible, I love the way you chose your words here to carefully paint us a picture and tell us your story at the same time. This is one of my most favored of yours.

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
sadly filled with longing--beautifully expressed

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
You always bless your poetry
with you ablity to produce great imagery
to the readers, Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Lost love . . . Squandered passion . . . . Yearning through the miles . . . Heartache in the making . . .

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
...a friends eyes...always remembered...for what is seen...can never be lost...in shared vision.
really wonderful Susan...
John

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Most eloquent love poem todate

Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Stunning imagery and write, Susan, passionate and wonderful to read! I get lost in your words...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
So much beauty in between all this () Colors in flight ~evevollo ~ Ted

Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Beautiful write, Susan; well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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