Someone Cry for Me (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

you nailed this one!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

expressed with intense passion and longing...

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

this was a very sad and beatufilly heart touching poem awesome job on it

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Excellent flow and form, Susan. The message is sad and, yes, I do believe there is a hint of hope, also. Great write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Dear Susan, You write so beautifully. I am crying for both my friends.

Tony

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Yes Susan...I know this feeling..been there..and you know what? it does subside..life can be so difficult at times...love can hurt so bad....sensitive people who love with all their soul...also hurt with all their soul..I am very sensitive..but also strong..just hang in there..stay strong..there is much life ahead for you...happiness is always just around the corner...this was sad..greatly expressed..you are a fine poet..love..floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

I am, this is lovely poetry.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

This is terribly sad and beautifully written
Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Susan, wonderful poetry.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

I think someone is very sad.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Beautiful poem although it does reek of "It Takes A Vllage," syndrome. Oh, it's good to be back reading your poems, I've been away.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Susan, I wish life was just love.
Excellent art and verses.
Hugs peace
Peggy

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

Susan....I am here for you...dont u cry...cheers...love n luck...great write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 25, 2003

I've said my tears are like dust! Could the wind just blow them away?

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Well done Susan! I love it when they rhyme and you do it so well.
Jack

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Susan, I'd cry for you anytime anyplace, if that would put a smile on your face and ease the pain in your heart. For I have been where you are now and know how the hurt gradually numbs you until there is no more tears and yet nothing will ease the hurting inside. So I'll cry for you so long as necessary. A century of more if you will it. Bill

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

3-24-03

I Think What You're Trying To say Is It Is Time To Stop Crying ,Start Doing!

TRASK

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Wow, lots of grief in this one.
Well written with a rhythm to match.
~E