Negotiated silence in this busy world
Straining to reap the dream
From constant pining and this aching swirl
In this vast valley of yearning
In my endless quest for time
To spend each eager moment
In his embrace...entertwined
Leaning into this daydream
Preparing for the sun
To warm this ache I have for him
In anquished desire my body hums
As heated rays kiss my flesh
When moisture emerges where
Each passion point of my desire
For him explodes and burns
His growth emerges boundless
My dreams bring him around
To being cloaked within my soul
To sculpting me complete ... his whole
Silence for these moments
Gripped in love's array
Playing with each wish for him
To dwell within my everyday.
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Reviews of "Negotiated Silence"
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2003
hmmm a sweet Dulcinea to someone fighting windmill in the vast land of desire....
wonderfully done.
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Looks as though you have a following, pretty lady. The accolades are well deserved.
Peace,
Cherokee
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Susan well done. I am very happy for you... The longing is felt by all.... I wish ahhhhh well you know... Thanks michael
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
this was outstanding fatnstic poem nice job on this wonderful poem
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wonderfully done.
Peace,
Cherokee
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Excellant writing
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thanks for your kind review
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