Tomorrow when the sun comes up
My shine will pale
My doors are closed
I've learned the value of passion
It holds the moans of a silent glow
The hard part of loving
The part that fails
The mission of focus that got out of hand
In growing together
Now parted
No value in the vagueness of now
I don't understand
Give me a reason and calm my desires
The ones that are flickering
Pleading for more
For the one who danced with me embraced me
Then felt our love grow
My knees are weaker
Gone are the plans
You know the ones of floating through skies
Smelling the flowers and walking the paths
Hand in hand humming
No reasoning denied
Future and laughter
The comfort and bliss
The fighting that ends in a tenderness kiss
The clutch for a moment
Moonlight all around
The smile so electric
With the shine that I'll miss
My heart is like his
With pride entrapped
Sheltered from love
My what a grind!
Broken down guesses with missives amiss
Barely hearts beat when missing it's shine.
Pain is prevalant in this one. Well expressed. Hope you're OK
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Susan,
I have missed you here...
"My knees are weaker
Gone are the plans
You know the ones of floating through skies
Smelling the flowers and walking the paths
Hand in hand humming
No reasoning denied "
this one feels so lonely and denied...
Peace
Peggy
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
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Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
pain..well penned....
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
This is very good Susan, I especially liked the first 5 verses!
~Nikki~
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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excellent .....write Susan
William
Reindeer
I have missed you here...
"My knees are weaker
Gone are the plans
You know the ones of floating through skies
Smelling the flowers and walking the paths
Hand in hand humming
No reasoning denied "
this one feels so lonely and denied...
Peace
Peggy
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~Nikki~
Love
Tinka
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$