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Lost Love...A Timeline
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
  
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Part of living is painful mistakes. It's a lesson we all learn in a hard way.
--Susan*


I went to the meadow my heart full of pain
I opened my fists to welcome the rain
It poured down in torrents
It soaked through my dress
Sheer to the bones then firmly was pressed
To my breasts gently molded
Securely it clung
As my lover once held me
Til his kisses stung
With passions that spoke of promises bold
Of futures forever
Of hearts that would hold
Time in a bottle
Hours that would span
Lifetimes of promises that would never hold sands
In the hourglass of fortunes
With the minutes of love
Stolen for moments that took me above
To soar with the woodstorks
Fly through the clouds
Drift with the jet stream
Laughing aloud
Gone with the clock hands
Turning the time
Forcing the rains with thunder that climbs
With streaks of these tears and flashes of light
That escorts the ghosts of pains that just might
Take steps to go forward
Forget all the shadows
Release them from spirits into this wet meadow
To forget love's sad past and live for the days,
For hopes that are hopes
With tears that have paid
Dues that give strength and wages of tears
To put aside sadness forsaking love's fears
Let raindrops cleanse spirits
Let these blue eyes see
While dress hems cling softly
Then wrap around knees
In natures caress I find new beginnings
I vow to go on forsaking the many
Oaths made in lust
Broken in haste
Gone with the rays of sunshine that tastes
Of gentle wet kisses that light on my lips
And warm breaths of breezes that move on my hips
As violes absorb moisture of tears and the rain
And palms open gently to release all this pain


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 Reviews of "Lost Love...A Timeline"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
A beautiful Write Susan
enjoyed reading
Excellent

William

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Susan this is is definitely a superb write...so much feeling expressed and albiet from sorrow...what beauty!
~Nikki~

Reviewed on May 22, 2003
This was beautiful, such a lovely poem, just touched me so tonight,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Every word is well chosen, poem well crafted, contents simply heart wrenching...

Reviewed by Bill Murray
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Susan, the feelings from your heart fill this poem in every word. I am in awe at the power and strength of your poetry. Bill

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
this is a wonderful, wonderfl write

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Great writing -- a very vivid feeling comes from this.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
This is exquisitely beautiful and bittersweet, Susan.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
I'm in awe of this stunning poem.
Chrisie

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Susan, very well done flows perfectly.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
fantastic....amazingly good write!!

Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
Excellent poem with an inexorable rhythm and fine imagery.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
Dear Susan, Your writing was fantastic!
But I am sorry for the content.


yf
tony

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
Wow, Susan. You are a fantastic writer. There is a musical quality to your verses. Love it.

Reviewed by Rican Romeo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
This was so amazing, fantastic write!!


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