What do folks do with the words I love you
Does the whisper to ears...give solace to few
What does it take when rhythms run wild
With beats of the heart and the smile of a child
The sentence of lovers to the future of holds
For caresses of minutes and gestures so bold
I love you...is it true ...a warm promise at best
The soul of a chance with the touch of a test
What fate is aroused when these words breath air
Will you fly with the storks or sail as a pair
Doves of all lovers lost in the clouds
Cooing and winging...singing aloud
Chasing the heart with blossoms of roses
Sparkle of eyes and kisses on noses
Chins all uplifted to embrace the kiss
His love is hers and her heart is his
Butterfly kisses and fingers entwined
Grace of a pair with hearts all refined
Smiles breaking faces and gentle warm hugs
Hearts all crimson with pushes and shoves
Lovers of shadows for one southern breezes
Quiet forms of sweethearts with tugs and soft squeezes
Lightning displays when evenings bring comets
Flashing emotion from the ground to the summit
Love held on high with the greatest of ease
"I love you" is whispered from this southern breeze
These pair of shapes all merged in time
Lovers who love with their love refined.
lovely, susan! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. :) p.s.: when you go to louisiana, could you eat some crawfish for me or listen to some cajun music? thanks! :)
Reviewed by Susan
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Love is sensual if its true. If it isn't true then its a lie like a lot of other farces in life.
Thank you for the review,
Susan
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
"...The soul of a chance with the touch of a test
What fate is aroused when these words breath air
Will you fly with the storks or sail as a pair..."
Beautiful lines. Provoking too. Bravo.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
i love you can get over used, but the sensual fell to this is real...
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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L...lies
O...o'tiose
V...violate
E...effete
Love hurt...but is damn nice if you have too!!
Love
Tinka
Thank you for the review,
Susan
What fate is aroused when these words breath air
Will you fly with the storks or sail as a pair..."
Beautiful lines. Provoking too. Bravo.