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Mr Right
by Brittany Renée → (All Poetry by Brittany Renée)
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Thank you for such a warm welcome back to the Den! :-)

Brown wavy hair, reaching good length
rich and smooth his accent flirts;
echoing eyes - I with no strength -
sly pout to, composure, divert.

Muscles smooth, curves of his own -
romance tainting timidness -
his smile speaks what I've known,
I'm poisoined by giddiness.

He wears jeans, a dirty shirt,
I'm feeling quite underdressed,
unrelaxed; my tone is curt.
Somehow he is still impressed.

Skin glowing in the sunshine,
his body shadowed by clouds,
I looked away just in time
to hear my thoughts were outloud.

In the shadows of his arms
in the warmth of our amour,
I soon wake in much alarm
he's but a dream, nothing more.

Walking 'long, a breezy night,
the breeze of a passer-by
who's seemingly out of sight,
catches my gaze,
irony, I'm amazed,
towards me walks Mr Right.

(C) Brittany Renee 2005

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 Reviews of "Mr Right"
Reviewed on July 19, 2005
Nice write here, you have always been a pleasure to read
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on May 10, 2005
nice write!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
when we least expect it the right thing occurs ... welcome back to the den ...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
The man who, one day,
captures your heart Brittany
will be a lucky man indeed.

Do not look for him
for he shall find you.

It will be the One
whom God has created
just for you.

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
He'd better me Mr. Right for the likes of you, Brittany Renée. Nicely done and it is so good to have you back. Welcome! Love and peace to you. Regis


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