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The Opening Of My World
by TONY MIKE NERONE → (All Poetry by TONY MIKE NERONE)
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A prose of two worlds.
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There is a crack in my life's boundaries

It is just large enough for me to fit into it

Inside is another world, a parallel world of Nerone

My boundary started in my birth, the crack began with my first cry

The other world is very much like this world except for two differences

I go through the crack opening minute by minute

My other world is full of joy, and delight

This world is abusive, painful, and tormenting

My wonder is my death, is it two worlds also

Am I to be in both heaven, and hell

Because my current being is living in both worlds

I am not a twin, I am singular

However my brain is a violent brain of two

One is in this current world

The other is in my parallel world

Could there be a third world where I can be a free soul

Maybe someday I will find out what lurks in my mind

Maybe someday I will find complete peace

Please Dear Lord show me the way

 

 

TONY MIKE NERONE

6-01-10

 

 

 


 


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 Reviews of "The Opening Of My World"
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2010
I was having fun dancing in your worlds--it should be better than the last and the one after shall be great and more completely satisfying and enjoyable for you. Nice writing--with a deep look in, Tony.

Reviewed by Ruth Gonzales (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2010
This is a very intense writing. It makes you wonder. You decribe your being to it's full and always with that positive spark that leads you in the right direction where you can be safe and not go wrong. Great message. Great writing... Thank you again and take good care...

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on June 4, 2010
Ever tried Christian meditation?

Reviewed on June 4, 2010
Many say that we, the poets, possess more than one personalities, and I agree with that on many occasions; for in life we are feeling so many things - happiness, and sadness; joy, and sorrow. With each phase we carry those emotions inside our beings, and we feel the various emotions. This is what life is all about. If there weren't and sadness and sorrows, we would not have felt happiness and joy.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on June 3, 2010
Unique and well penned Tony

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on June 2, 2010
Tony I find this write very interesting, and must tell you again that I admire your honesty! Thank you so much for sharing this powerful write, and may He strengthen, sustain, and bless you with His presence! Be encouraged Tony!


Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed on June 2, 2010
Tony,

Very thoughtful and provoking write. But I know through the review you gave me, you're going to be just fine. Peace and love to you, my newfound friend.

Mary

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 2, 2010
"...my brain is a violent brain of two..." yin and yang, the good twin and the evil twin, the irresolution or the stubbornness; when one have such a brain one can expected the unexpected!

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 2, 2010
He will, Tony. He most definitely will. Well said, my friend and may God bless.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
YOU ARE CALLING ON THE RIGHT PERSON, TONY...THE LORD! NO ONE KNOWS US LIKE HE DOES...HE KNOWS US BETTER THAN WE KNOW OURSELVES AND LOVES US MORE THAN WE COULD EVER LOVE OURSELVES. SO, AS THE WORD SAYS, 'GO UNTO HIM AND HE WILL GIVE YOU REST', 'HIS YOKE IS EASY AND HIS BURDENS LIGHT'. GOOD WORK, DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, BLESSINGS AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
Your faith is strong as your body and mind fights between two parallel worlds. Eternity is ours for the taking...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
Tony, Your faith and goodness will always enter you into the best world full of only love and joy!! You will be shown the way when it is your time. Try to stay positive and stay in the light!
Your friend, ~Chessly

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
An introspective poem looking for a peace only found in heaven.
Well done.

George

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
Your words are honest and open and truthful, making this a good write.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
When you find your answers, it will be at that moment of enlightenment. You will know and understand "why".....

Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
This is a very pure poem, so honest, and it is a puzzling thing, that crack. But what comes through this poem seems to come through the doors of faith, and you are revealing something hopeful to all of us.
Blessings,
Christine


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