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TheDecoratedMind
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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 Christmas tree sat in the corner,
a symbol of holiday honor.
The brain sat in the head,
a symbol of intelligence deed.
Neither will decorate without a helping hand.
Finally decorated the tree is a beauty,
just part of ones holiday duty.


Oh, what a lovely tree,
mind still on an junk thought spree.
Much effort put in the tree,
none put on a mind in scramble.
Poor brain left alone to gamble.
On the roll of the dice,
a frozen brain of ice.


A beautiful holiday exterior in glow,
brain still scrabbled don't know.
Whole holiday ended in disaster,
poor brain with no negative caster.
Tree setting in the corner bright,
no one left to enjoy its lovely sight.


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 Reviews of "TheDecoratedMind"
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
This is very sad Grady...the mind
should be decorated and lovely just
like the tree...alive..with life...
maybe we should put lights on it
and bring it out of the darkness...
loved this..floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
Beutifully done, sad message, Grady!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
This one has depth Grady!

Reviewed on April 5, 2004
nice poem, grady! thanks for the read; enjoyed much~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
..hmmm..food for thought indeed..my heart is left pulsating within a brain devoid of knowing..ty

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
Sad message. But, in my opinion sad messages can make for great poetry. Nicely done.


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