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Smack Somebody
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Violence is not the answer but it's a good substitute, if you feel like paying the price. A price sometimes hidden, until after the devil does his bidding.


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Some people need
the day smacked out of them.
But will you be the fool,
or remain mature and cool?
Who the jell wants to be mature,
when a good butt beating is the cure?


Your brain is dictating,
butt beat negotiating.
Smack that jerk hard,
should have done it from the start.
You hesitated too long,
you know where your hand belong.


But you kept them down,
refused to smack the clown.
You'll get another chance,
so don't give me that glance.
Look at it this way,
you stayed out of trouble
another day.


There's assault chargers,
dido back butt beating,
maybe you couldn't win.
He or she might be bigger,
then there's always the trigger,
so go wisely figure.


This poem is my reminder,
to try and be kinder,
not let evil be a blinder.
Too attack
or not to smack,
a very good
question!


G





 


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 Reviews of "Smack Somebody"
Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2005
Haha! Very funny.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 4, 2005
Oh, my, I relate. Talked to the ex last night on the phone after he left our son in tears. The man so needs a good smack down, but what purpose will that serve? All he'll do is get up and whine "She hit me!" Then play victim for all it's worth. LOL He takes no responsibility for anything he's done ever. It's always everyone else's fault, even his children owe him in his mind and are always wrong. Good poem, G. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 4, 2005
Whats the matter, Grady, did the Ravens lose again...LOL? Ed

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2005
They will get smacked eventually, but not
by me unless they threaten my family in
any way.
Glad to read you again oh wise one.....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 4, 2005
A true smacker of a write...if you want a kick visit my articles...you might find a laugh or three there!!

Love Tinka


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