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Final Release
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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A beautiful day in the sun,
all type of lovely fun.
A true feeling of joy,
even for a few minutes,
maybe stretched even longer.
No problems popping up,
nothing going corrupt.


Recorded in the memory banks,
not forgetting to give thanks.
Later on trying to recapture,
what was pure rapture.
Like a junkie chasing dope,
a super vision in scope.


Wishing many more days,
in all type beautiful ways.
Facing the rising sun,
going out for more fun.
Seeking true and lasting peace,
knowing death is the final release.


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 Reviews of "Final Release"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 14, 2006
Wonderful sentiments well-shared, Grady. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2006
Well I hope you aren't planning on dieing any time soon, darlin'.
Sounds like you have the blues.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on January 14, 2006
excellent write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
Have to agree with Cynth'ya on this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
Don't wake up, this is a wonderful dream!
blessin's Bro. G.
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
I think a lot of people do want to
go to hell. They don't believe there
is one.
Thanks for sharing G-Man...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
True.. Though every wants to go to heaven yet no one wants to die...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
It's the good days that help us to get through the tough ones Grady, coupled with our understanding that we cannot always control what happens to us, but we can control how we respond to it. Attitude is everything...a beautiful sunrise or sunset doesn't hurt either. ;)
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
You got that right but thank God for the good days as well as the bad He sees them all.


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