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Visiting
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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People, places and things, physically and mentally.


Certain places we visit,
with the behind.
Excuse me,
I mean the mind.
Excuse me again,
I mean our kind.
We might have to leave others behind,
they might not understand our mind,
too them our demand may fall blind.

They might question,
why you going there,
like they really care?
You might be going to work,
they might be lazy,
sitting back with their eyes all hazy,
from laying around all day.
They don't go out and make no pay.
You they might try to use,
kick around and abuse.
Then question why,
you want to visit the police or the priest.

A lot of places we visit,
mentally and physically.
Some people will have us,
visiting the devil himself,
down on our kness praying to God for health.
They'll push and shove,
abuse our love.
Make us want to give up nice,
take a samuri knife and slice.

They'll get in your heart,
tear it apart.
Get in your sex,
like you're not suppose to also have a hex.
We all hex on sex,
no one is immune,
we all have to find tune.
But if it's not their way,
they'll try to "f "  up your day.
Throw a monkey wrench in your play.

If they're not living in your head,
they might need to back off instead !

G





 
 

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 Reviews of "Visiting"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
I can relate !!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
i hear ya,Grady~great poem~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
No no... not all hex on sex. You get out of that funky mood right now!
Let's face it, Grady. Some never get it, that's the rub.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Being a misunderstood soul myself, I can identify with this poem.

Great Fun Piece!

Bobbi

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
whoa grady sounds like someone has you pissed off. i like the way you write, regardless of your mindset at the time


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