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U in View
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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In Baltimore the police have cameras all over, if it's not the cameras it's the nosy neighbors watching. Then there's big brother in the sky.


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Eyes see you,
you can't get away from their view.
You might not see them,
it could be a her or a him.
Maybe an alien curious,
or a hater furious.
Could be the cops,
checking all our stops,
to make sure we're not
growing illegal crops.


All depending,
but it's never ending.
The government has
big brother in the sky,
to watch the terrorist go by.
In crime stopping honor,
the police have cameras
on every bad corner.


Look up and say cheese,
leave me alone please.
Maybe we can hide in the trees,
while catching a cool breeze.
Or just stay in the house,
be glad we're not the mouse.


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 Reviews of "U in View"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Tweet-tweet...this is sweet!!

Man or mouse...this was good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
As always excellent sweet sweet man...Hugsssssssssssssssssssss

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Your poems are always excellent and informative One! Thank you!

Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Sad that it is coming to this, but with the criminals we have today they don't have a lot of choice.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
kinda reminissent of 1984's big brother eh?

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Smiling draws suspicion you know,heh.

Nice writ and fresh subject.

Thanks,
~D.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
It's true! And I'd like to think they're all "peeping" for our safety, but it doesn't always work out that way. Very nice job with your poem, One!
Love,
CJ


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