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Re- Write
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This life we're in is really not for real, it is a nightmare of what could happen if we follow the devil.


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No Eve, I will not bite that apple. It is from the tree of knowledge, God forbid us from eating from this tree. Where is the creature who gave it to you, I am going to behead him?
That's alright, I'll find him myself.


Where are you my evil enticing creature, I want to have a word with you?

Adam, is that you?

Yes, it is I, show your face my evil foe.

Here I am Adam, behind you, did you like the gift I gave your Eve? Wait a minute, you can't behead me, stop!

You want to bet!

( Swoop! )

Ouch, where's my body, I can't believe you cut my head off!
That's alright I'm the devil, I shall return in another form more powerful and you will then pay!


+++++++++++++++++++++++

Adam, this is the Lord thy God, great job you did on Satan. He will return, you can't really kill his spirit but I have given you power over him. The Garden is yours for as long as you wish to live there. You and Eve will want for nothing. All down through the ages your offsprings will live in peace and harmony. This will be as long as you resist sin and the devil. Now go, Eve awaits your return.

Ok, Father, you must forgive Eve. She does not fully understand the power of knowledge and evil yet, but I will teach her. I will go and rest now, it has been a hard day.

I'll be with you Adam, my first man, you make me proud.

One


 


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 Reviews of "Re- Write"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
thanks for the re-write...now I get it better...but still love my apples ....TSK!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 8, 2007
...and then, the schmuck went and took a bite!!!!
How long was Adam in Paradise?
Gotcha!!!
Georg

Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Interesting write, One; well done! Happy Easter to you and yours!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I bet you will teach her SOMETHING, specially after a HARD day, must have been the viagra...Ed

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I think you should try your hand at acting too! (One never knows) lol. loved the poem, love holly

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 7, 2007
Interesting take at the end -- "She does not fully understand the power of knowledge and evil yet, but I will teach her." Excellent write. R


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