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D i r t
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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no man will ever be totally clean or free from sin...

make that man of sod,
then blow breath in him God.
hey, a little dirt
might get mixed in,
don't matter that will
be his sin.
no matter how clean,
a little dirt will always
be seen.


man can take a bath,
still some dirt
will remain in his path.
his food will be the same,
no matter how good
he cleans his game.


forget the perfect barter,
at least he will have water.
water with no color,
it will hardly cost him a dollar.
for his soul he'll have to pray,
it's this or the devil
will make he pay.


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 Reviews of "D i r t"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
I agree with Tinka, no one is perfect and no ever will be, except our Father above...that is why He advises us to pray daily, to repent! Great write One, very insightful, many do not see things in this way, but I must agree with you. If one feels they are perfect, they better watch out or they will fall! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
No one is perfect!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
Well, sweet sweet man you have nothing to be worried about,your just sweet sweet sweet to me...well done,Hugssss
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
love the "dirt" we work and work but oh that dirt is hard to get rid of

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
no matter how clean,
a little dirt will always
be seen.

So True!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 11, 2007
Please, anyone blowing breath on my dirt?
A nice one.
Georg

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
good write. So glad God is forgiving.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by HB Clayton
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
No matter how clean, a little dirt will always be seen. So true. Peace and Acceptance is the key. He can take that speck of dirt up with his maker. I enjoy how you can mix the message with some fun. - HB

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
How very true, nobody's perfect! That's what makes us human.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed on May 10, 2007
So true, no man/woman is perfect!

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Word.......

:-)

Reviewed on May 10, 2007
Excellent verse, One; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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