No one but me knows
how I've failed
But I thank God for
the little I've excelled
Anyone in my shoes
would probably
have the blues
They'd be sitting in
the morning sun
trying to figure
what they've done
But they already knew
not a bad as many
but less than few
By time evening came
they'd be overwhelmed
by the shame
Still trying to
figure the game
They'd know basically
life ended a long time ago
Like they didn't
already know
The most successful people in life are the best failures, they've failed many times over and hence why they know what to do and have done it and become successful.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2008
You're a wonderful writer and a man oh a sweet sweet man ....stay safe and well...Big Hugssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Well, I don't buy it. You may feel like a failure and think you haven't accomplished very much, but your writing says otherwise. A failure quits trying to get back up, not that they didn't succeed the first time around. Excellent write. Liz
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Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo
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