Sometimes it best to move your brain on to a more positive place even if you physically stay where you are.
I might remain a member
of this den
and I'll continue to swing
my pen
But I have moved on
I'm here
and I'm not here
I've faced all my poetic fear
for me the air is clear
The fraction of my being
that still remains
could care less about any
blood stains
or if on my den it rains
The truth is
writing verse offers very
few gains
only the fun of versing remains
Verse helped me move on to
a higher level
and to understand and control
my evil
Being a member of this den
is the same or even worse
than the real world I'm in
My finds
in cyber and in real life people
possess the same type minds
Body mass might be missing
regardless they require the same
old azz kissing
No matter what you are
it takes a strong attitude to
reach any star
Through all the bullchit
most do quit
Not me
opg
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Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Dear OnePoetGem,
I haven't forgotten you, my friend. I know how you feel. It is so easy to step on the toes of others. As you all ready know, I do that sometimes. Truthful people won't always be popular. Some of us like truthful people and want to be truthful, though.
I am still here, I post and review now and then. Hope you do the same.
NOPE! Can't let you do that! Remember: Many read what is posted, and can't always express their thoughts; maybe slow down, but never stop!
NEVER STOP!
Blessings friend - Micke
I am sorry to see you go it is sad what is happening here in the den, I for one like your writings, though I may not always have the time to comment, but I am trying, and I understand your need to move on, I have felt that way often myself
In Christs Love
Michelle~
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I haven't forgotten you, my friend. I know how you feel. It is so easy to step on the toes of others. As you all ready know, I do that sometimes. Truthful people won't always be popular. Some of us like truthful people and want to be truthful, though.
I am still here, I post and review now and then. Hope you do the same.
Love and prayers,
Patty
NEVER STOP!
Blessings friend - Micke
In Christs Love
Michelle~
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(