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Piece of Mind
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What and who really rules, one things for sure the devil drools?

Sometimes I think we are being robbed blind we don't even control our own mind The devil makes a lot of us mean God's influence tries to make us kind A lot of us get stuck between the two Then act like we don't know what the heck to do Our stomachs rule big greed has us eating like a pig Sex has us by the neck don't get any we become a nervous wreck We all chase the buck very few have rich luck In between coming and going our brain suppose to help control what we're doing This seems to be a bunch of crap cause half our brain always nap If we don't be very very careful we'll also lose it and zap A piece of mind we surely got the whole brain certainly not opg

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Reviews of "Piece of Mind"

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Kewl, That's true, from the percentage we use!
Great Poem ONEGEM!
But, you used your noggin for all this "WISE" Writin'!

WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Warrior Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

You must have more than a "piece" of your mind, Grady. Much wisdom you still have to give us! I like it...I like it!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

I think you're are certainly right about people not controlling their own minds... though I'm not sure about the devil making us mean. I think it is a choice 99.99% of the time. Nice one.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

Its FATE... Do Read My Latest FATE To Come!

TRASK

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

Only too true. Only God can save us from what we are.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

OPG,

We certainly do get confused at times! Wonderful write.

Mary

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

You are a wise man, you make me think.

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