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RemovedPoemSandie
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This poem was a mistake because it made one of my best friend on the den hit me with an earthquake.

This was a stupid write,
and it almost did cause a fight.
I should have never posted it,
and then its damage wouldn't transmit,
or hurt a friends feelings,
or anyone elses feelings.


I only wrote it because of a dull friend I know,
not in the Den though.


He always comes around,
talking and feeling down.
Instead of positivity,
he is deep into negativity.


I tried to lift his spirit,
but he doesn't want ot her it.
Then he gets me all consummed,
then I start feeling doomed.


I like positive people who make me feel good,
this friends makes me knock on wood,
and not feel good,
about my own agony,
which is a tradgedy.


Sorry everyone,
if you read "Dullass" it's now gone.


G


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 Reviews of "RemovedPoemSandie"
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Always stay as cheerful
and upbeat as you are!
You give us all a smile
here at the den with your
writes. Refuse to let Mr.
Dull get to you. Maybe
when he sees your positive
attitude he'll learn from
you.:)

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Didn't read Dullass, but this is good and to the point! ~Z~

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
did not get to read dullaa, but I am reading this poem, and all I can say is never let dull/crazy or anything that can bring you down into your world.. cross the street and run....... good write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Powerfull Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Grady..... This was cool.. like a sing song.. Wink

E~

Reviewed on August 25, 2003
good advice here, grady, but you are no dullass! your writes are straightforward and to the point, and i like that! great job! :D (((HUGS)))


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