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First Impressions
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It's best to face the truth then do the best we can at making our lives work out.

I wasn't old enough to make one.
I was pulled out of the womb,
then learned that I had to leave in the tomb.
For a long time I didn't understand,
lifes crazy mixed up demand.
Then when I figured it out,
I still wasn't sure what it was about.


Lets see now,
I had a mother and father,
the father never did bother.
The mother didn't force him,
so we never saw him.
Most of my young life,
I spent depressed in strife.
Then apart of my adult years,
I shed many painful tears.


After I really matured,
I still wasn't reassured.
I'm thoroughly convinced,
not stupidly suspensed,
my first impression,
would have been my worst submission.


I hate this place now,
I would have hated it then,
even before I got a chance to begin.
But I'm stuck here,
so I learn to live here.
The only way out is through death,
and I love my good health.
So I positively adapt,
instead of negativily being inept.


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 Reviews of "First Impressions"
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Wonderful write, Grady! Happy 2004 to you, my friend; may it be your best year EVER!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Love you, Grady!

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
<So I positively adapt,
instead of negativily being inept>

That's the spirit, Grady!
Welldone!
Safi


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
I Ditto Andy on this one Grady!!

Happy New Year Buddy!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
I admire you, Grady.
Your childhood was a struggle
but you look at your life as
a positive force, not a negative one.
You turn lemons into lemonade my
friend. You've learned through
many tears that life hurts, but you've
come through as a responsible, mature
adult who looks at life in a positive
way. If life gets you down , and it does
to everyone at times..you bounce right back
up! Yes, I admire you. Keep the den shining
with your light. Happy New Year to you and
yours...

Yf, *Linda*

Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Life hurts sometimes; but we all learn to cope with it.

HAPPY NEW YEAR GRADY!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Grady, life can hurt but this is when we call on each other to take up the slack. Peace and Happy New Year!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Spend nine months trying to get out,rest of life trying to get back, yup look on the bright side!!


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