Wow, this is lovely, John! I like the first three verses leading with questions, the fourth with those beautiful images, and the last with its message of eternal love. Very well composed.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
This one is sooooo beautiful. It can almost sung out like a song. Well-done indeed!
Sandie May Angel