You have been talking in my dreams..
Living in my mind..
Your trying to tell me something..
What are trying to find?
Night after night you invade my dreams..
Kicking around old memories..
I wish I knew
what you wanted from me..
Just say what you have to say..
then go to where you belong..
You keep me up at nights..
It is like you will not leave my brain..
You are there the minute I close my eyes..
taking me through memory lane..
You keep looking at me
as if I am to blame..
Why am I to blame
for the way we ended?
I wish you would stop trying
to make a truth into a lie..
You didn't care about me
when I was young
and you didn't care
the day you died..
I was not in your thoughts..
Not one little bit..
So why are you here?
Are you trying to get even?
For me not being by your side?
Are you trying to make me
pay because I chose to hide?
You keep reaching beyond the grave..
but there are some things in this life
I will always refuse to face..
So please say Good bye..
and then say Good night..
give me one last hug..
to make things right..
Then go with God..
Know that you are free..
and then maybe I can sleep
without you talking in my dreams..
Living in my mind..
Please I cannot bear to see you..
not even one more time..
Wow. Moving and so deep. A dark, somber and bit of mysterious write. It really captivates the reader first hand. Great capture of emotions, Erica. You, my friend, are the true poet. You capture reality in a fantasy world and you do it more than brilliantly ;)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
Fine write, u captured the emotion .. j
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2003
agreed with both. nicely written perhaps a little editing
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Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*
good first draft!