Ohh God
I love you came from his lips..
I will love you
forever..
There is no
other..
Love..
fantasy.
lies..
No
Not lies..
Blind emotion..
flowing on emotion..
Believing love to be true ..
Not understanding..
That emotions change..
as people do..
Infatuation..
leads to complications..
Not for me..
I never say I love you..
out load..
I try to imprison it
in my mind..
Shoved back into
a hole of darkness..
it tries to climb..
Do not ever utter
those words to me again..
I do not want your vows ..
of undying love..
I do not want promises
that cannot last..
Promises of love..
Simply an emotional ride..
It will bring you up
spin you around..
Dizzy with love..
you will hold on tight..
your resistance low..
you have no where left to go..
so it brings you down fast..
end of ride..
Infatuation blast..
Infatuation over..
No more
fulfillment.
No more
commitment..
This ride is not what I wish..
So please don't let
I love you..
ever pass from your lips..
extemely well done, God, Erica, a lot here, so much within and you give us the very poetic, human 'core' of it...yes, those words, whew..this is aweing... and am not surprised, what a piece, it got to me, I..it just did!
bravo, always honest, soo honest and can YOU ever write!+++
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
Erica how true...I love you means so very much it should never be said unless truly meant..great write...floria
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
A lot of people say I love you and it is mere infatuation I agree it shouldn't be said unless truly meant in a deep meaningful relationship
Very effective write, Erica.
I think you struck a chord we all can relate to. I know I have found myself about to utter those three little words, then pull them back like a pitt bull on a choke-chain.
-James
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Hi Erica, If you have never said it, you are lucky. Not all have that will power to hold it back. It comes out and then pain, pain for ever along with love for ever too.
You express your feelings so sweetly and emotionally. Great write.
"Infatuation Blast" is a masterpiece in short lines of meaningful messages. Once one starts to digest them, the imagination strikes many ideas. It keeps beating one heart's drum.
I salute You, Author-Poet Erica Ivory.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
bravo, always honest, soo honest and can YOU ever write!+++
even if i do
ha
josie
Excellent emotions and thoughts I agree we all have done this at least once.
Hugs
Peg
wonderful insight
I think you struck a chord we all can relate to. I know I have found myself about to utter those three little words, then pull them back like a pitt bull on a choke-chain.
-James
You express your feelings so sweetly and emotionally. Great write.
Love from India - Joel -
I salute You, Author-Poet Erica Ivory.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU