~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Black sunshine in my eyes.. Darkness .. steals the light.. I wonder why.. I am meant to roam this life.. as if I am blind.. Imagined light in my mind.. A distant illumination .. Of a life I hope to find.. I try see through This darkness.. But time after time.. I see Black shadows of sunshine.. obscures your face.. I can't see yours eyes.. Wonder if you see mine.. Black sunshine all from me.. Wish I could rid my heart of this haunting disease.. Black sunshine.. hides your face.. Black sunshine Black sunshine Keeps you away.. It is here to protect me.. It knows not of my hearts decay.. From loneliness filled with darkened days It only knows of protection.. My black sunshine.. My fear.. My hostage.. My prisoner.. My only safe place.
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Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2003
I think we all understand the black sunshine, and igloo's it creates, just the enunciation of it, however, means its temporary, and on its way, al
Black sunshine Erica. Your sunshine can be whatever color you want it to be, your world can also. We all make choices for various reasons or another. The most important point is, "to be dam sure you're living where you really want to be." If you're living one place and your heart and soul wants to live in another, troubles on its way! Black sunshine touches me. tk G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Great write!
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Very well written! Good one!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Fantastic write Erica...sad...an all alone poem...great work..floria
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outstanding, wonderful, dark write
enjoyed very much
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Love Tinka
~Chrissie
Good reading from an outstanding true WRITING.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU