One Dimensional (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

I love this one. So truthful and insghtful.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Erica...insightful write packed up with emotions...well done...loved this much...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Insightful and emotive. Excellent poetry.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

You have the poets soul, unlike a lot of us here on AD. We who try but fall short can look to you for the path to soulful poetry. This is . . . good . . . articulate . . . introspective . . . deep . . . good.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Excellent insights and reflections in this poem.

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

a touching, emotional expression

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

lol...you have the gift of insight, poet. unfortunately, as you say, too many others do not. the goal then, is to find those that do, and god save the rest. because we certainly cannot. thoughtful work, poet.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

When you only see what is skin deep..
The only one to lose..
is you."
Very profound ending, Erica, to a profound subject... love the depth and meaning in this... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Your life could start anew..
When you only see what is skin deep..
The only one to lose..
is you.

..indeed Erica you have burst forth with a great truth..an eternal one..I am so grateful for this write..ty so much..it goes into my library!

Vesna

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Reflection can be a beautiful thing. Through your reflection here I see in you, through your own words:

"You are a spirit..
A wise soul..
You are fighter.."

And I will add a lover of life.

Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Fine psychological insight here.

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

You take a pretty picture, unlike those who are over exposed.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Powerful insight!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

nOT Llike a picture Erica, your poem definitely isn't like a picture. it has thickness and form. If I tore it the world would bleed out. Read, enjoyed and moved. I try real hard not to be flat on people. hugs G

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

"One Demential" is depicting emotions and asking for answers within, and responding through the flow of its story of collision of souls.

A true poem written with words of emotions.

Happy Day, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU