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South Avenue Train
by Mary Ann Biddinger → (All Poetry by Mary Ann Biddinger)
Thursday, March 17, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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                                      South Avenue Train

                                                    ===

                                    She left the exit of the

                                    South Avenue Train

                                    Empty and cold her heart

                                    The tracks drawing her to

                                    An unknown destination

 

                                   

           South Avenue Train
           (c)march162016
            maryannbiddinger
 


 


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 Reviews of "South Avenue Train"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on May 6, 2016
To move on to the unknown is scary. I have dont that a few times in my life

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Carol Ann Phelan
Reviewed on April 12, 2016
This is such an inspirational write! To move on takes courage and trust in oneself. Life is too short to be lived in misery.

Wishing you an abundance of creativity!

With respect and smiles...

Reviewed on April 9, 2016
Could feel the desolation. So few words to leave such a strong impression, well penned Mary Ann.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 4, 2016
Much is said in these few short lines....M

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 27, 2016
THANK GOD WHEN WE GET OFF THAT 'TRAIN RIDE', EMPTY AND COLD, GOING IN THE WRONG DIRECTION AND ALLOW OURSELVES TO BE 'DRAWN' BY THE TRACKS OF A NEW DESTINATION. THIS IS THE KIND OF POEM THAT ALLOWS EACH READER TO LOOK AT IT FROM THEIR OWN PERSPECTIVE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 21, 2016
Although your poem is very short, it is very effective in conveying the emotions that you intended. Well done, Mary Ann. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 19, 2016
What do you feel when looking at this picture?
...the A+ goes to Mary Ann Biddinger.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 18, 2016
Certainly one way to, "Get out of Dodge." One does not know if she is going exploring the unknown or escaping. I guess it makes no difference, leaving what's happening to interpretation.

Ron

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2016
lady mary ann another hit...blessings .....i love this one. anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 18, 2016
Powerfully Sad.

Reviewed on March 17, 2016
Lady Mary Ann!!! You've got it together!! Magical words!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 17, 2016
I'm with Richard here, Mary Ann. A novel in the making.

Reviewed on March 17, 2016
Going no where fast is definitely a story line I can relate to .

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 17, 2016
A telling image. Compliments your brevity well. Could be a springboard for a novella. Peace to you...


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