I supoose since i am so late
there is nothing left...serves me right
a beautiful offering Andy
I especially like the closing
I had some Grecian sacrament bread Antidoron
Blessings & Offerings
Vickie
Andy, the vernacular is unique to the knowledge and the facts -- the first line, first stanza do not match wth my interpretation -- a sacred event unparalleled in my Christian world -- peace and love be with you my friend -- Jon Michael
concept's great but it also kinda reminds me of Benny Hill and Adge Cutler and The Wurzels. Nice and unique, though, and I like the combination of the sacred with the lifelike-and-natural everyday: just as it should be. Check out first line last stanza! :)) xx
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A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
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I really enjoyed this, Andy~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
love,
tiggs
there is nothing left...serves me right
a beautiful offering Andy
I especially like the closing
I had some Grecian sacrament bread Antidoron
Blessings & Offerings
Vickie
Anna
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Georg
Regis
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"