AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Connie Amarel, iMORGAN ST. JAMES, iBruce Humphrey, iRiley Blake, iScott Zachary, iJill Eisnaugle, iBethany Peterson, iTom Kitt, iMyra Darwish, iWilliam Potter, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Andy James Turner

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· 112 Titles
· 1,885 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2009

Andy James Turner, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



Her Perfect Beauty
by Andy James Turner → (All Poetry by Andy James Turner)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

.

Of nobility she was spawned
Her beauty is perfection
The soldier kills with a bullet
She, her tongue.



Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Her Perfect Beauty"
Reviewed on July 4, 2010
This is wickedly true Andy

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
IS IT ANY WONDER? FOR..."OUR TONGUE IS THE PEN OF A READY WRITER" WELL DONE...AND EXCELLENT WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on June 29, 2010
Methinketh the bullet to be more lasting; her "tongue" dangerous to those ears that absorb. But I understand what you speak of, Andy...the damaging results cannot be reversed. Great four-liner, my friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed on June 29, 2010
Truly thought provoking Andy, and the metaphor is great.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 29, 2010
poignant read

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Cool, calm and poetically very collected. I very much like the measured intensity and unwordiness of this, Andy. As others have commented, few words and silence can be more deadly than a battery or tirade. Like with Goliath, your "one-stone" stanza does it's job with accuracy and aplomb... a-bomb! :)) Good stuff, Turner. Big tick and a gold star from me. xx

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Oh yes. Words can move worlds, there is nothing moe pwerful I think. Well written. Take care.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
...wow, powerful Andy, hmmm?? is there a part two to this??

Reviewed on June 28, 2010
WOW. Much packed into these lines, Andy -- well done, Sir!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on June 28, 2010
LOL!! You just can't argue with a woman, she will kill you with her tongue. But then...poets do too - with their pens.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
What a powerful poem! It's so real ~
But silence can also be a weapon, just as the tongue ~ I don't know which is worse at times. You are a poet that gets the reader all worked up and thinking about life. And now I'm hoping, I'm just hoping this tongue thing can never be true about me.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
True, some people are more dangerous with a tongue than a gun! Enjoyed this, Andy.

Anna

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
You got that right, Andy. I still remember my ex-wife after we had two children tell me "I never loved you". I am glad you wrote this because us guys are always taking abuse.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Do you know my first wife??!!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Chels Duncan
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
And don't you know it
The best thing about women
we don't need weapons to hurt men
:-)
Chels xxx

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Luckily, I got smarter and divorced her!!!(LOL)

Georg




Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
yes, yes Beautiful Andy... sticks, stones, and words Can hurt us...

Great to see you as a l w a y s!!

Love and harmlessness,
Suzie xox :-D •●♥Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ♥●•

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Andy, few lines.......written perfectly, powerfully and beautifully.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Ah yes. This I have witnessed, Andy. Short but powerful. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis


New Poetry by Andy James Turner
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  6.  Spindrift
  7.  Kindness
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  Our Restless Minds
  10.  Roadkill Memoriam
  11.  In The Still of The Night
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Dream Just a Dream
  14.  Feeling Lonely
  15.  Hunting for Truth
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  Whisper Pens
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  20.  Mythical Dragons
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Perceptions by Odin odin@aflx.com

"Perceptions" is a Limited Edition book of prosetry and photos where prose and verse are interrelated to explore philosophical ideas.  
Member BookAds

Pacific Crimson - Forget Me Not by Edward Patterson

First Hand Accounts in Verse memorializing the brave hearts that fought the War in the Pacific.  
Member BookAds

My Treasure Trove of Poems. by Sophie Boswell

This is a collection of poems - many with photos - composed over a ten year period of my life.  
Member BookAds