IS IT ANY WONDER? FOR..."OUR TONGUE IS THE PEN OF A READY WRITER" WELL DONE...AND EXCELLENT WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Methinketh the bullet to be more lasting; her "tongue" dangerous to those ears that absorb. But I understand what you speak of, Andy...the damaging results cannot be reversed. Great four-liner, my friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke
Cool, calm and poetically very collected. I very much like the measured intensity and unwordiness of this, Andy. As others have commented, few words and silence can be more deadly than a battery or tirade. Like with Goliath, your "one-stone" stanza does it's job with accuracy and aplomb... a-bomb! :)) Good stuff, Turner. Big tick and a gold star from me. xx
What a powerful poem! It's so real ~
But silence can also be a weapon, just as the tongue ~ I don't know which is worse at times. You are a poet that gets the reader all worked up and thinking about life. And now I'm hoping, I'm just hoping this tongue thing can never be true about me.
Blessings,
Christine
You got that right, Andy. I still remember my ex-wife after we had two children tell me "I never loved you". I am glad you wrote this because us guys are always taking abuse.
Blessings and Love - Micke
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Sandie Angel :o)
But silence can also be a weapon, just as the tongue ~ I don't know which is worse at times. You are a poet that gets the reader all worked up and thinking about life. And now I'm hoping, I'm just hoping this tongue thing can never be true about me.
Blessings,
Christine
Anna
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
The best thing about women
we don't need weapons to hurt men
:-)
Chels xxx
Georg
Great to see you as a l w a y s!!
Love and harmlessness,
Suzie xox :-D •●♥Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ♥●•
Regis