A Day in the Breaking (poem) by Andy James Turner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 21, 2013

Such a beautiful portrait painted with each and every word. :)

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2013

I like how this poem activates the sense of sound and touch (open window and winnowing winds) and smell (of car engines) and taste! = (just the word "ripening," even though it is the sun, we are thinking of fruit. No wonder your readers are pleasured by this writing. So am I... ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 12, 2013

Great visuals for a new day!....M

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on January 11, 2013

What a perfect picture you painted with your words...what a delightful day in the making

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 10, 2013

sounds like an enjoyable day
love the imagery
Thanks for sharing Andy
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 10, 2013

Andy, there is such a positive affirmation of life in this poem - I feel uplifted with renewed expectations for life - you have created a rewarding piece of reading my dear friend - I wish you love and peace - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on January 10, 2013

Lovely imagery...oh, I miss chestnuts..none to be found hereabouts

thanks,
Gina

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on January 10, 2013

A day in breaking this morning's beauty. A sweet rendering
to beautiful days.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on January 9, 2013

A perfect day in the life!
and liking it...Andy

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on January 8, 2013

Picture postcard beautiful in the best sense; a charming poem!

Reviewed by Kathryn Perry

Reviewed on January 8, 2013

I love it!

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 8, 2013

you take me there Andy!!
we you sitting on your front porch?
I see you there with a glass of sweet tea

Bee Hives In The Clover Meadow
Vickie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 8, 2013

A day in the breaking is always a marvelous thing to experience. And Happy New Year, Old Chum.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 8, 2013

...want nothing to do with horses nuts...;-) e

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 7, 2013

This poem is alive from beginning to end.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2013

Lovely and engaging... ...right up my alley, when I'm not hurting from my lost love. Thank you, Andy. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 7, 2013

What an endearing and unforgettable delight of a poem, and one that leaves the reader utterly happy!
Blessings and Love and Happy New Year and Belated Merry Christmas xo
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on January 7, 2013

Wonderful...gives one hope for the promise of spring! Very much enjoyed...

Anna

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on January 7, 2013

things to love and be remembered
budd

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on January 7, 2013

I love this.. from beginning to end. It has a whimsical quality but also a very reflective tint to the words.. very nice!
Myrna