Andy, you've done it for me, captured the allure and magic of a stolen kiss and the magic night time plays in its presentation. Wonderful, just wonderful my dear friend. I wish you love and peace. Jon Michael
Oh my goodness... one of your very best, Andy! Delightful flow and sprung rhythm to this (not as in Gerard Manley Hopkins, but it trips along like stepping stones!) and lovely internal and external rhymes. So delicate and light which depicts the bliss of that kiss wonderfully... and its lingering, perfumed aftertaste. BINGO! :)) xx
This is like Romeo's outcry, so intimate in feeling and such a source of delight right through the last line!
The red heads always get the guys :)
Blessings,
Christine
hug
Kathy
Karen
just beautiful
john
Rx
love being contagious..
Lady Vivian
A stolen kiss under the starlit night..delicate beauty in romantic
poetry.
Lady Mary Ann
:)
The red heads always get the guys :)
Blessings,
Christine
peACE BE WITH YOU
wILLIAM
budd
Regis
Ron