I love this clever poem Andy!
I particularly like the last two lines…( I too love Shooting Stars)
The inclusion of motion in this piece is so cleverly written!
BELIEVE IT OR NOT...THESE ARE PRICELESS GIFTS FOR THE EYES TO BEHOLD WHICH FEEDS THE SOUL, GIFTS...THAT SOME HAVE NEVER TAKEN THE TIME TO ENJOY. THANKS FOR SHARING, ANDY. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
I like the abstract jaunt of this poem, Andy. It has a feeling of flight and colossal motion, of sound. With these lines being so short, even the form of this poem has velocity, and I really like “Dawn wakes her son/The son sees the sea” — those are two curious and uniquely-written happenings…so succinct, so effective. ~~ djl
What a Tale is told in this delightful story of Didge the wayward little Roo.
Catch up with him as he turns the Billabong from a Dull everyday water hole, to a lively, fun place, through many adventures and conquests.
Grab your inner child, and jump into Edie's latest 'puddle', as she takes us for a delightful trip through the magical landscape of a child's imagination. Her wonder-filled poems take the ordinary situations and places around us and stretches them t
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I particularly like the last two lines…( I too love Shooting Stars)
The inclusion of motion in this piece is so cleverly written!
Diana…🍃
Great to be reading you poetic work again
been absent from the Den too long
it's about time for my return
Peace be with you
William
Ending with some interesting action by action words like fell and shoot.
Ron
Regis. 🙏🌲🌳🍁
I thought about the bee's knees but
that would be too easy. Fun time with words, Andy.
beautiful poem dear poet. thank you for sharing Andy