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A weeping Sea
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I am the bountiful Indian Ocean
In Somalia I stretch over 3000Kms.
On my floor I see plenty of riches
On the surface I see no canoes
People are not fishing.
And en-masse they are dying
There is war, there is famine
Havoc wrecked all institutions
They wait for food donations
But food can't be sea freighted
The port was closed by warlords
Why people don't come to fish
I asked myself?

Then a big laugh came from a Sardine
It alerted me, brought my senses back
Sardine said “Leave these people alone
They are Somalis. Most of them don't fish
Their culture despises sea faring
They are nice people, very nice people
May be the nicest I have ever seen
They don’t catch small things like fish
We are so plenty and safe in here
Their ignorance is a blessing for us
It lends us more time to enjoy life"
In hearing these words, the sea wept
It tossed up tired waves and said to Somalis
“If Mother TIME can't teach you a lesson
I can’t train you how to catch fish


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 Reviews of "A weeping Sea"
Reviewed by jacqueline amos
Reviewed on February 6, 2005
Peace be upon your house, these are words of a prophet.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
excellent again

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
AbdiNoor, you are a treasure which I hope your people
know about! This is top class poetry once again from you!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Very creative and intense write!

Reviewed on September 21, 2004
love the tale you have weaved in this masterful and compelling write! well done! (i agree with the fish, too!)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :)

continued prayers to you and your nation....and the world, really...

Reviewed on September 21, 2004
(((abdi-noor)))

not only somalis, but men of all nations can learn a powerful lesson from this uniquely crafted story--BRAVO, dear (((brother)))! and i agree with the fish--

"...they are nice people, very nice people
may be the nicest i have ever seen..." :)

(((HUGS))) and love, and always, continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
MashaAllah! The sea isn't the only one wondering about our stupidity, Abdi. I hope Somalis are reading this:)
Safi


Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
wow! right there in plain sight! pax A

Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Wonderful poem, especially the last two lines.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Wow...this is an awesome poem,I loved reading this one!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
I always enjoy your work. This is an excellent piece.

"If Mother TIME can't teach you a lesson
I can’t train you how to catch a Fish"

A wonderful ending!


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