My Heart Weeps for You (poem) by Abdi-Noor Haji Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

This needs to be discussed in more detail Abdinoor. Many cases of this happen all the time. Please think of writing a novel about it. I am sure it would sell fast.

Thanks brother

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

But love knows nothing about tribal caste
Love knows only the heart it shares with love

And you educate us all extremely well, Abdi-Noor.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Abdi-Noor,

A beautiful offering from opposite sides of the tracks my friend but that doesn't make it wrong.

Reviewed by Fergus Hancock (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Abdi-Noor, a lament that could turn to bitterness and hate so easily. Hate only breeds hate; yet you do not succumb to hate. Your poem speaks of desire to break the barbed wire of caste and outcast.

So well written, so deeply felt. Blessings on you, Abdi.

Fergus

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Nice write...Hugssssssssss

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

It was a pleasure to read the poetry you have shared with our readers, look forward to viewing more....

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

A sad write my friend, but expressed well!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Love knows no bounds but the castes of men are clear and unconscionable.

Ron

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

I really love and enjoy words written from the heart-mind-body and soul. it captivates and catches the readers attention and I admire you for that. Keep writing and never stop because writing is such a great form of all releases

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Sad poem Abdi. We are all created equal. The trouble is tradition. I loved that cartoon movie where the dragon was in love with the donkey and they made it work. Best wishes...Joyce M.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Very nice...your work of thoughts are well expressed within this view of a love that is just beyond the reach of a grasp...the views of others from rich and poor and or the difference between tribes, funny how after all these ages love still has barriers....

nice poetry.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

This poem can be expanded into a wonderful love story! I like this, Abdi!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)