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A Fallen Tooth
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You were a source of delight
The flicker of a candlelight
The glow of a dessert moon
The sparkle of jewel eyes
The sound of ocean waves
The soft touch of a breeze
But these days dear honey
And much to my chagrin
I miss your companionship
I feel unshielded from winds

Into the depth of my heart
Your silence is making a sound
Sending out echoes of fears
reverberating in the walls of my soul

Deep in my heart
You were a spot of love
But since you have deserted it
It is now filled by emptiness of mind
In the jaws of pain I am thrown, honey
As loneliness is trying me out
Like a child on a broken bicycle
Taking pleasure of my vulnerability
Like a tongue pushing itself through
a hole vacated by a fallen tooth

     

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 Reviews of "A Fallen Tooth"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 6, 2009
" I feel unshielded from winds" -- truly love is a marvelous protective barrier, from the influences which would lead to a broken heart -- there is melancholy and joy in your poem Abdi-Noor my friend -- may the spirit of the new year mend a wounded heart -- JMW

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
From the depths of your soul a heartfelt beauty has emerged. God bless....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Abdi Noor, your heartfelt expression and deep passion have penned a beautiful poem of the depth that missing someone reaches!very
beautiful writing.

Eileen

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
What power these words of yours are my friend. Fantastic touching write. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
A metaphorical delight.

Walt

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Abdi-Noor,
I can feel the lonliness in this write...the heartbreak. Thank you for such a kind comment on my poem! Yes, it could be song! Enjoyed your poem too!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
Very powerful, and very sad, my friend.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
A well written and excellent poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 5, 2009
A literary kaleidoscope of a poem, perhaps you where there when Sherezade told stories for a thousand and one night.

Georg



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