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Hyperbolic Chamber of Doubt
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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The sanctimonious always demand agreement,
as weakened souls cave in appeasement.
Their neural networks truncate from doubt,
when reality searches for anyway out.

Drifting in abandonment on a sea of kelp
all demanding souls cry out for help.
Weave them a thread of love with cajole,
spin a yarn embedded with hyperbole.

And as the lost cling to a flimsy web of lace
praying to him that is seen without face,
their sheer nerve tears through the cloth,
for in the darkness they seek light like a moth.

Life often beaded on a thin cord
spins pearls of wisdom none can afford.
For if truth were so easily obtained,
then questions would not set us aflame.

The truth is what it always was
man's beliefs interspersed with flaws.
So s
eek not for answers to questions unknown;
lest the answers leave us all feeling dethroned.


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 Reviews of "Hyperbolic Chamber of Doubt"
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
This was excellent..I loved that last stanza!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
Bravo...well done....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
Sara, you really take the bull by the horns......this is deep and probing....just how I like my poetry...best served with a good gin tonic.....Great stuff....good to be back reading......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Great write Sara! I love the last two paragraphs. There are two ways of dealing with reality (1) logic/scientific = we accept we do not have all the parameters to solve the equation, and: we do not know how many truthful outcomes might be possible. (2) religious = we fill the gaps of input/parameters with religious mambo-jumbo, re-run the equation and believe the only resulting outcome is absolute.

We are learning how dangerous the second option is.....

Love. Franz

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Not often we see you in rhyme Sara. This is very much in line with my own philosophical position so how could I possibly not like it.

love
Ian

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Can you see me? I have a dumbfounded look on my face.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
A very deep write Sara, it says many things...our search is never over. It's just human nature for it to continue. Lisa

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
when the answers reveal how little we know, those were the answers we should be glad to have questioned ... powerful write with some very nicely developed images:
their sheer nerve tears through the cloth,
for in the darkness they seek light like a moth.



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