iced (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

iced
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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this damn wave am i riding it? or is it riding me? hey! let me tell you i am riding whatever it is and i am holding on for dear life with both hands and both feet and even my teeth because i am riding this part of life down! i just hope the trough hits soon because that would mean life gets to flip its switch from bad, to worse to�to� better? yeah maybe to high, to great, to full of life, to love of all there is to love. now that's nice and iced* � 2006 Sara Coslett * "iced" - to execute a wave perfectly

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

Great surf! There's more to gain; whatever is is asailing, conquored;
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on October 10, 2006

Good poem Sara. If only life was as simple as riding a wave. Waves all come from the same direction, life comes at you from all directions at once.

Reviewed on October 8, 2006

A powerful metaphorical offering, Sara. Thanks for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Nicely iced. Too cool. Back to school.

Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

And if you fall in. SWIM for your life.
Kewl metaphor...

You are a good poetic surfer Sara!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Excellent take on the subject of life -- the metaphor of life vs wave in a poem is ... "iced" (perfect!)
Warmest regards,
CJ

Reviewed by Felix Perry

interesting and real words of life and living brought to us in the talk of the wave rider, what a stunning comparison,well done Sara.

Fee

Reviewed by jude forese

you ride the waves of life with conviction and determination ...

good poem, Sara ... enjoyed reading ...

Reviewed by A PAX

Good attitude
cool write..........
very pop........and wise..........good combo sara
paxA

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

That was fun to read and yup, it always gets better.
However the pessimist would say, "It always gets darker before it gets pitch." lol
Rusty