Unseen (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 24, 2008

Beautiful photo. I can see into myself but don't always see myself as others see me. Working on improving my life and my thoughts and do good to others more frequently. It does take lots of work to get somewhere with your life. Loved this write **********.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 2, 2006

wow
you just described me

your one scary person..........and thats a compliment lady! lol pax A
this is a keeper Sara

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 2, 2006

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Keith Cross (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

Thank you for the comment about my poem 'Feather and Anvil'
This one inspires me to ask, 'Do you believe in ghosts Sara?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

Your poem is peeking out, revealing the secret.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

Reflective write Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

Story of my life, Sara. Would you write my biography?

You speak on behalf of many women.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

Sara,

Succint, powerful perfection. So much conveyed in so few words--dynamic!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 30, 2006

I think many will relate, Sara.

PS The Resurrection Mary tale is true...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

Sara, The poem goes well with the art , you have an uncanny way of expressing your sentiments to perfection!This is superb! ET

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

This is absolutely well done, I can feel the layers of soul and mind encompassed and hidden in this verse. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

You've appeared to be a mystery woman, and now, I know you are a deep one. Intriguingly composed and presented. Congrats. - Bill

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

Hey Miss invisible, you sure could have fun...
I'll be in the tub in a hour..seya there

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

Now there is food for thought, Sara. Indeed something to meditat upon. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

Sounds like the north and south pole in a tug of war for the equator.

This is rich with the feelings of yearning for something that should be that hasn't manifested itself as yet.

Very mysterious Sara, but also fullfilling ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

This is as good a psychological insight to one's own personality as you'll ever get. McCartney, in one of his songs, wrote along the lines of going so far inside of himself that he comes out of his back.

All that I am is a secret
To everyone, even me.
Yet Freud, Klein, Rogers, Jung et al would suggest they have the key to knowing who we are.
I guess we are lost somewhere in all the historical and contending social baggage that make up our beings.
I teasing piece, thanks.